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1. ORIGINAL VERSION : The traveling disturbance intensity division is basically away from the traveling line the far and near. Different distance reflection traveling activity human disturbance intensity is different, distance is nearer, the disturbance is bigger, distance is farther, the disturbance is smaller.

OUR EDITING : The intensity of the traveling disturbance can be divided by the distance of the traveling routes. Different distance reflects different intensities of the human disturbance caused by traveling activities; the shorter the distance, the stronger the disturbance, and the longer the distance, the weaker the disturbance.


2. ORIGINAL VERSION : A.salina is a species of Branchiopoda crustacean and one of standard experimental organism of marine contamination toxicity testing

OUR EDITING : A. salina belongs to Branchiopoda:Crustacea and is one of the standard experimental organisms used for toxicity testing to asses levels of contamination in the marine environment


3. ORIGINAL VERSION : Now already sixteen kinds of antiserum for virus in the fruit trees have made, but the system of the antiserum has the difficulty and the price is expensive

OUR EDITING : Currently, 16 types of antiserum for virus affecting fruit trees have been identified; however, it is difficult to produce antiserums and they are expensive


4. ORIGINAL VERSION : The annealing procedure at 800oC for an hour was applied to the sample grown at 630oC

OUR EDITING : Annealing of the sample grown at 630oC was carried out at 800oC for 1 hour


5. ORIGINAL VERSION : The single crystal ZnO was used as comparison

OUR EDITING : The single crystal ZnO was used as reference.


6. ORIGINAL VERSION : Large-scale commercial release of transgenic crops has sparked off intensive debates worldwide regarding their biosafety in the agroecosystem

OUR EDITING : Due to concerns regarding the biosafety of transgenic crops in the agrosystem, large-scale commercial release of transgenic crops has sparked off intensive debates worldwid


7. ORIGINAL VERSION : according to the visually different hybridization image on array

OUR EDITING : according to the visual interpretation of the different hybridization images on array


8. ORIGINAL VERSION : Potassium resource is poor in China, and most of potassium fertilizer depends on import (Wang 1996), which consumes a large quantity foreign exchange annually. Lack of soil K is getting worse and worse, the effective supplement should be found to accommodate expenditure of soil potassium aiming at different soil types and planting system. Wheat straw is abundant organic material, which is ubiquitous and it’s organic potassium resource. Straw is returned to soil directly or indirectly, which can constitute a favorable soil environment (Li et al. 2002). Most previous works were studied on effect of fertilization and straw to soil on soil physical character, basic nutrient change and improvement of crop yield and quality (Nel et al. 1996; Wang et al. 1996; Li et al. 1998; Lao et al. 2002; Turley et al. 2003; Liu et al. 2005 ), and experiments were scarcely studied on different forms of soil potassium and potassium contribution to soil.

OUR EDITING : China has poor resources of potassium and large quantities of potassium fertilizer are being imported every year (Wang 1996), which consumes foreign exchange in large amount. As there is considerable decrease of soil K, an effective solution that can help reduce expenditure on soil K and is suitable for application to different types of soil and planting systems should be found. Wheat straw, which is ubiquitous, is rich in organic material and it is the source of organic potassium. Straw is returned to soil either directly or indirectly, which can constitute a favorable soil environment (Li et al. 2002). Most of the research that was carried out previously has focused on the effect of straw on the fertility of soil, the changes in the physical characteristics of the soil, the changes caused in the levels of basic nutrients, and the improvement in the quality of crop and yield (Nel et al. 1996; Wang et al. 1996; Li et al. 1998; Lao et al. 2002; Turley et al. 2003; Liu et al. 2005). Only few experiments have focused on different forms of soil potassium and the contribution of potassium to soil.

 

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